Review for I Don't Love You

I Don't Love You

(#) StormRavyn 2007-02-27 01:05:50 PM

Very good and well written. I like the structure of the story and the plot has potential. The chapter is too short and seems to end without anything occuring, as in there is no point to it, but I'm assuming that's because this is the prologue. If it is then it's fine. I'm looking forward to the next update!

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