Review for A Promise to Keep
(#) reinsultrul 2007-02-27 09:06:56 PM
The plot was definately new, but it also draws the reader in really well, like the reader's actually there, not just on the outside watching the pictures their imagination creates for your story; and the emotions pulled out, the twists and turns weren't really what I'd thought they'd be, it kept surprising me and showing me something I never would have thought could go with the characters. I didn't want to have to stop reading it for something as silly as sleep or school. Your story combined most of the good rating descriptions, it was impossible to choose ONE that really fit properly.
...Well, heh, I guess that was a little over-board, but that's basically it. Sorry if it's a bit much.
Oh, this is from the review that said I couldn't think of any one rating that really fit so I chose the closest one.
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