Review for I'm Not Okay, I Promise

I'm Not Okay, I Promise

(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-02-28 05:05:29 AM

I know its like, a little late n evrything, but ive only just read this story, i didn't particularly like it because i think that it was all too rushed, like how gerard said about three things to her and then they were in love, or how everything happened so fast. i also noticed that you didn't use much description. i think that there was extreme OOCness on gerard's part, and how the guys were fine with him marrying sum1 he only just met. you've got a nice writing style, though. I look forward to reading more of your work. p.s, FRANKIE IS SOOOOO HOT!!! (not as much as Gerard, though!)

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