I'm interested in how this is going to play out. You obviously have Harry in love with two women now. The unbreakable vow proves this. I'm curious as to when you plan on involving Ron and Hermione in this story line at all. By this chapter it is obvious that you have some animosity towards the other two members of the trio. I look forward to your next update.
As always, thanx for reading and reviewing. What can I say, Harry has a lot of love to go around. Ron and Hermione will fgure into the story later in the summer. I have no animosity toward Ron and Hermione, but Belle is VERY protective of her bondmate. . .
I plan to update by Wednesday.