Review for Family Issue
I really hope Belle, Marie and Harry manage to find a way to stay together and perhaps formalize their relationship.
The scene with the drinks was great fun, and the pillow-talk and oath was moving - though I hope Harry doesn't drift away (and manage to patch things up) with Hermione and Ron... although they'll undoubtfully will have "issues" with Bella, Marie and Harry's daughter. When it comes the Durselys, I hope Harry present them to his wifes (getting a bit ahead of myself) and daughter (and perhaps Ron and Hermione), and let them (especially Belle) have a "talk" to them.
I'm also very much wondering how Ron, Hermione and his other friends will react to him getting a daughter - not to mention his girlfriends.
Speaking of friends, will Hermione and Ron be involved in the final show-down with Voldemort (not necesserely the rescue though)?
Even if you end the story before, I hope there will be sequels about Alexis growing-up and going to Hogwarts.
On a general note, your writing has greatly improved from the first chapters which I found somewhat disorganized. I still find the "army-speak" a bit hard to interpert, and would have prefered it to be slightly more... well, English. Finally, I hope there will be some more smut-scenes soon.
Keep up the great work.
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