FicWad

It's a great story and I love it! I've already read it all but I remebered something so I came back to this chapter... I don't know if it matters to you or not, but the Sanish you used in this chapter is a bit off;
first:¿Dónde usted puso mi camisa? It's not completly wrong, but it really would be something like ¿Sabes donde esta mi camisa?
second: ¡Doy para arriba! It does't really work in that context, it is ¡Me rindo!
Third: "Usted tiene que aprender confiar en a gente otra vez, Maria. No es el ser sano un ermitaño" That would be "Tienes que aprender a confiar en las personas de nuevo, Maria. Ser un hermitaño no es sano"

Again I don't know if this matters to you, woth Spanish being my first leguage and everything, I couldn't resist

Cheers,

Aryes