I see you're putting things up here. I think I'm going to start too. I don't know if I'll close down my FF.net account or stop posting to it, but it is getting pretty pissy lately. I might simply stop posting new stories there, but update what I've got. Let me know if we're going to put up the group account here or not.
The story itself is pretty good, and seems to be a nice character piece, or at least conversation, between the two boys.