Aha. I just read BJH's second review. I must confess, I'm disappointed. Although you did an excellent job of packaging it into a single chapter, I would love to read more in this analysis of Hermione. It reads differently enough from other work so that it could build logically and true-to-canon as a HG/anyone-you-choose story.
Sorry for the diappointment, but I'm glad you liked the little character piece.