I'm sorry I am so late with reading. I'm sorry I'm mostly a no-show on both ficwad and buzznet these days... The reason is life's a bitch and so am I.
Now on to more important things:
The beginning of this chapter with the one line describing what happened and then a mini-conversation between Molly and one of her friends/ the shrink was super! I love that technique. Kudos!
My heart broke when Patrick told her that he couldn't take her back in his room. And then you put it right back together and made it pound furiously when he came to see Molly in her room and told her he was still in love with her and things weren't completely hopeless. :)
Oh... snd I think Patrick's mom is creepy. ;)
Author's response
Miss Alex!?!?! is it really you?!
I hope everything's okie dokie over on the other side of the big puddle. You're not a bitch. at all.
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. I'm gonna try to work on some more tonight..if I have 5 minutes. It took a while to write 'cause I couldn't get the tone right--but I guess based on this I managed to pull off what I was going for.
Patrick's a stupid boy. like whoa. He does stuff like toss girls hearts around and stomp them into itty bitty pieces and then slaps some crazy glue on them and hopes it sticks.
visual much?
Patrick's mom creepy? you think? hmm...not what I was going for. Might need to work on that.