Review for Surreal

Surreal

(#) gucci84 2007-03-15

Wow... I haven't reviewed on this story in a while. I actually didn't know where I was at so I re-read it all just now.

My heart's broken for Julius. Delilah’s being really stupid by replacing him with drugs.

You have the characters down to the ‘T’. Scarlet with her "Mm-hmm's" and Julius with his rubbing the back of his neck when he's not sure about something. Love how you gave Ursula a black eye at some point, LOL.

This Roger kid, needs to be caught. That date rape drug thing has always been the most scariest drug I've feared. You show the effects of it all well, and it makes us realize a lot. I'm sure I'm not the only one who wants to reach into the story and strangle Roger.

Good story. I can't wait for you to update. I was all like "YES! Finally, Julius notices what's wrong!" then I go to click on the 'next chapter' button, and there is none. Oh boy if I weren't at work, I'd probably cry a loud “NOOOOOOO!”. LOL.

-Gucci84