(#) Rous 2006-05-30
I wandered over here from the forums. After reading your poem, I could not justify the illiterate rating. There are numerous grammatical errors, but that does not make it illiterate. If there was a rating for it, I would list it as mediocre. It is not a bad poem, it just does not do a lot for the subject. While not an expert, by any means, I have written quite a bit of poetry (which I do not plan on posting here, for obvious reasons) and I review quite a bit. So, I do feel qualified to point out the grammatical errors and the repititious wording. This could be very nice with a bit of editing.
Thank you for sharing.
Thanks for the comment and suggestions!