OK, read it, still too short for my tastes. If you're going to do NC17, do it with the cheesy circa 1970's porn music in the background. :) That said aside about the porn action, you've got an interesting chapter here. I'm just curious on if you can transcend into other subplots and lay them. You still need the other horcrux and you NEED to introduce the trio. It would definitely help the plot and thicken it up a bit. That's all I'll say on the subject.
Geovanni Luciano
Author's response
Thanx, as always, for reading and reviewing. Hey, wasn't it GLuciano who suggested that I 'make use of the R rating?' Oh well. Good news, all the Horcurxes are accounted for in the next chapter, bad news; it's a cliffie.
Laughs evilly
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