Review for We'll Make Them So Jealous.

We'll Make Them So Jealous.

(#) GwenMerlon 2007-03-26

Ok, time to make a hitlist... I'm thinking on it we need to include Amy, Stump Club girl, and Megan (yes, from your other story)... for Patrick's I can already see that Mr. Felix will be ranked number one. (Ok, not a REAL hitlist... I don't want anyone to get all emotional and send a bomb squad out to my house or anything... totally fictionsl hitlist for fictional characters).

Anyway, poor Fiona. There has to be more to this story in understanding why she is so upset over the entire thing. She is being a little over the top with freaking out over it so my guess is that something happened to someone she knows (like her mom or something)and the father didn't follow through really screwing up the family. Am I right??? (Ok, you can tell me if I'm wrong, I'm tough like that.)

Sooo... Patrick is too cute. I have to kind of be on his side right now because he's having a completely normal reaction. Fiona needs to realize that as well (as Patrick needs to acknowledge that it COULD be his) and they both have some growing to do. They need to be more understanding... yeah, that's what I'm looking for. But oh well, it's completely pointless to counsel fake people... haha, but wouldn't it be cool if they were real? lol... well, no I guess it wouldn't since I just made a hitlist. I could get into trouble then.

And this addition of Fiona's father into the mix is quite interesting. I really do love this story. It is one of my all time favorites and I get sooooo excited every time I see you've updated. So update all the time!!! (You know, so I spend MORE time reading on here and not doing my homework)

Points Points Points... You completely Rock, Alex!

Author's response

lol a hitlist sounds fantastic actually - (see i now diverted the FBI attention from you to me, just as planned)
and you know there is always hidden secrets and stories awaiting to unfold, lol, so no worries there.
and yay for Patrick's side, usualy he gets his chops busted lol but i'm glad that he's recieving love in this story for being adorable.
lol, you know i live for your essay reviews Gwen you rock my world.
yay for points!!!