Review for Drawn Toward Unity

Drawn Toward Unity

(#) helluin 2007-03-29

I like the way you're managing to slip plot facts in very smoothly with an actual scene. The idea that Lulu made Zuke go slowly to make him think twice, after Ginnem's hastiness, is a nice bit of "gap-filling" (filling in what canon didn't explain), as is the backstory for Ginnem as some sort of relative of Lulu's.

Cid's voice, is, as usual, spot on.