I like what you did with Molly being the only one that wouldn't kill Penny; The suspicions on Snape are very well thought out, I like how you had everyone react to them, and loved the insight to Snape's mind. Keep up the great work: I can't wait for another foray into Peter's mind! Update when you can, but until then good luck in your real life activities.
Author's response
Like I said earlier. Taking a cannon Molly and convincing her to use a dark artifact on another person was the highlight of this chapter. No matter how hard I try, I just can't see Snape as a good guy. Jim