Review for The Betrothed
The Betrothed
(#) bellachaos 2007-03-31 09:23:27 AM
Great story. Mulan is one of my favorite Disney movies and I really enjoyed your take on the story. I like that you incorporated aspects from the poem and from historical record, even though you played with the timeline a little to add more action. You have a very natural and mature style of writing that is often difficult to find in fanfiction. Keep writing, you have talent!
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