Review for The Betrothed

The Betrothed

(#) bellachaos 2007-03-31

Great story. Mulan is one of my favorite Disney movies and I really enjoyed your take on the story. I like that you incorporated aspects from the poem and from historical record, even though you played with the timeline a little to add more action. You have a very natural and mature style of writing that is often difficult to find in fanfiction. Keep writing, you have talent!