Review for The Coin
My only problem is that it's so short that nothing really happens; I don't really "get" anything out the story. Yes, Jack is well characterized - I can fully imagine him attempting to steal Charon's boat.
On the other hand, what's the point, really? I get a kind of "Uncle Remus" feeling in terms of the storytelling style, but it meanders a bit too much and ends up leaving the reader with a kind of "so now what" feeling.
What I'm trying to say, really, is that writing is good, but the story doesn't really have a point, or the point mentioned in the summary. I'd recommend fleshing out the story a bit more; it's short even for a one-shot.
And he is dying, lying immobile on the floor, and all he can think about is where his siblings are b...
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Story of a girl suffering from anorexia, bulimia and self harm.
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This is just a simple love story between Frank and Gerard. Don't like? Don't read. -_-