The last two chapter's have been really good. It was really funny how Penny have caught, by Percy. I do wonder about Ginny, did she learn anything from the Diary of Tom Riddle aka Voldamort. Seem to me that answer would be no. She hardle know Penny and it should take time to build trust. I heard a saying once it take week to build trust, but can be destroyed in minutes.
Author's response
I am glad you appreciate the twists I have worked to include. The version of Ginny in this story is a bit immature as opposed to all the worldly wise versions of her in fandom that wrap naive Harrys around their mature beyond their years fingers. Jim