Review for Lost Poems
Lost Poems
(#) Rous 2006-06-02 09:45:11 PM
This did not strike me as particularly well written. It has some great imagery, but is confusing at times. The idea has merit, but the execution does not fulfill the vision. Perhaps more work would be of benefit. It is worth the effort.
Thank you for sharing.
Rous
Thank you for sharing.
Rous
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