Review for From a Fallen Angel
From a Fallen Angel
(#) Rous 2006-06-02 09:48:40 PM
I am not sure what the point is. I can surmise, but it is not clearly stated. The premise is promising, but does not pan out. The grammar and punctuation could use some help. All-in-all, a worthy effort, but it does need work. Thank you for sharing.
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