Review for From a Fallen Angel

From a Fallen Angel

(#) Rous 2006-06-02

I am not sure what the point is. I can surmise, but it is not clearly stated. The premise is promising, but does not pan out. The grammar and punctuation could use some help. All-in-all, a worthy effort, but it does need work. Thank you for sharing.

Author's response

Thanks for the comment and suggestions!