Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) FallOutGrl 2007-04-02

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Kay...HOORAY FOR CELEBRATORY MAKE-OUT SCENES WHICH SHOULD'VE(IF PATRICK WASN'T AS HURT)TURNED INTO A CELEBRATORY SEX SCENE!!!!!!!!!!

BOO FOR BITCHY NURSES WHO TRY TO STEAL PATRICK FROM AVA!!!!!!

HOORAY FOR PATRICK CALLING AVA AND HIM A THING!!!!!!!!

BOO FOR PETE NOT SHOWING UP TO SEE POOR PATRICK RIGHT AWAY!!!!!!!!!

HOORAY FOR YOU!!!!!!!!!

Okay....I'm all done.

:D PLEASE CONTINUE!!!! I'm dying without this.

Love
Mrs. Leto

Author's response

Ooo, a sex scene you say? Sounds like fun... maybe soon, you know, after Patrick is well enough to... perform and all. I'm glad you're excited!!! This review totally made me smile. :D