This story is so sad and yet so captivating all at the same time. I'm sure you mean for it to be going that way, and I just need to comend you on your work!! I absolutely love the style of your writing, it really captures the character's feelings and awkwardness unlike any I have ever read. You should be proud!
Anyway, I rated, because you're just amazing like that, and I hope you update soon. ;)
Author's response
Why thank you for the rating and review. I adore them almost as much as I adore your stories (don't let me get away with not reviewing your lastest chapter of "The Mistake" I've been meaning to get to it since you posted it the other day).
"sad yet captivating" I like that. With Lindsey I really just aim for maintaining a character different from the ones that are in most stories. She's got a dark past and is far from perfect. There's a lot I try to keep in mind when writing her character, mostly though instability.