Review for *Make-Up Story!!*

*Make-Up Story!!*

(#) Randog 2007-04-06

...A GIANT PARRANA FISH LEPT OUT OF THE NEAR BYE POND AND SWOLLOWED THERESA WHOLE. JAY WENT DOWN ON HIS KNEES IN SHOCK "WHY?? OH MY DID THIS HAPPEN TO HER? WHY NOT ME??"""
TO ANSWER HIS QUESTION THE FISH TURNED TO THE LEADER OF THE TITANS "I DON'T LIKE RED HEADS. I FIND THEM ANNOYING. THINK HOW MANY KITCHEN APPLIENCES AND PREVENTABLE ACCIDENTS HAVE BEEN CAUSED BY THEM EH?"
JAY THOUGHT ABOUT THIS AND KNODDED "WELL CAN YOU AT LEAST EAT HER AFTER WE'VE DEFEATED CRONOS?"
THE FISH NODDED AND SPAT THE GIRL OUT
"URGH...YUCK!" SAID THERESA AND THE FISH WENT BACK TO THE POND.
"REMEMBER OUR PROMISE" HE SAID BEFORE HE SANK INTO THE MURKY WATERS.
MEANWHILE ATLANTA HAD STARTED CRYING ON ARCHIE'S SHOULDER
"WHAT'S WRONG?" HE ASKED HER
"MY HAMSTER DIED YEASTERDAY!!" SHE WAILED
"OH"
"IT FELL ASLEEP AT THE WHEEL!!!!""

haha! you wanted the reviewer to continue the story!!! don't worry, i'll stay tuned for the next chapter!