Review for A Time to Keep

A Time to Keep

(#) siaru 2007-04-09 04:33:11 PM

(Hinting but not spoiling) That moment... INtense, I call it.

Only one glitch I see in this story: if I remember correctly how a Time-Turner works , it's a one way trip... so now Harry has to go back at the usual one-second-per-second rate. If you feel so inclined, there's a chaptered story right there: what Harry got up to, while Harry was away at school, to make winning the war a foregone conclusion, without getting recognized or caught.

Author's response

I didn't know that had actually been established -- I guess I just figured if you could turn it one way, you could turn it another. But that's an idea -- I'll have to think about how to do that. Thanks! And I'm glad you liked it :)

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