Review for Family Issue

Family Issue

(#) Essedyss 2007-04-11

Excellent chapter! I like the history you've added to give the Corp. more depth. As another reviewer said all thats missing is Hermione, but even if she doesn't become part of the 'family' this is still a great story. I'm hoping you do more with Maggie, too. Even with the brief introduction I'm looking forward to more with her. hint hint Anyways, keep the good work and those updates coming!!

Author's response

Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. Maggie just kinda popped into the story, but I think she has potential. Let's see what happens.