I laughed at several parts in this! Ah, that Mikey rolls eyes BOYS!
Hmm, I wonder who's throwing up in the bushes, if I had to guess, I'd say Gee. But that's just a guess.
I like this story and the way you write. It would be cool if you had a little more description, but it's awesome so far!
Thank you so much!! And about the description thing- I'll try to do that more in the next chapters, so watch out!