Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) MCR_dynamite 2007-04-13 10:24:59 AM

I laughed at several parts in this! Ah, that Mikey rolls eyes BOYS!

Hmm, I wonder who's throwing up in the bushes, if I had to guess, I'd say Gee. But that's just a guess.

I like this story and the way you write. It would be cool if you had a little more description, but it's awesome so far!

Author's response

Thank you so much!! And about the description thing- I'll try to do that more in the next chapters, so watch out!

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