Review for Tender is the Night
(#) marsonfire 2007-04-13 07:07:27 PM
But here there's an actual reason for why Michael would go after her, a reason why she'd be attacked, and a good one at that. I love that there's actual plot here lol...I hate reading the stories where it starts out with a girl getting jumped just so the guys can rescue her.
I love that we've gotten the story and the reasons and there's history behind everyone's stories. I also love the picture you draw of Ellie's mom, I can totally picture her. She's so realistic - not bad, not good, just a person.
Great job =)
However, as big as this seems at this point in the story, it's not what our story is about. It will be ominipresent, but I guess you could call it the spark for the rest of the story.
I have a lot more to say on this, but I can't without spoiling. We started an LJ for this our own commentary on what is going on.
Thanks so much for your comments, they really mean a lot.
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