Review for Light(e)ning

Light(e)ning

(#) Frimmy 2006-06-07

well, much as i'd love to flame you for the intro paragraph you gave, i can't, because there's nothing much to flame really. except it's hard to tell whose speaking at times. and the transition between jokingly/playful to romantic/serious is a little fast.
asides from that, it was pretty good. keep writing!