Review for Harry after the end

Harry after the end

(#) mathiasgranger 2007-04-17 10:22:29 AM

The story was fine, and yes I could see Ron doing that. Too many view Ron as this great guy, when in reality he is the glory seeker Harry was accused of being. I can think of a handful of times where he would brag around about an exploit he actually had little hand in finishing. Let's look atr the chamber of secrets....what exactly did Ron do? He got his wand stolen and he was lucky it backfired.

Somehow an award for special services to the school...what?

My only problem was the single spaced formatting. It is not easy on the eyes.

Thanks for writing,
Matt

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