Best Chapter Ever. Period. I'm floored by your talent, I don't actually have words, here, have my writer's heart, ambition and inhibitions because you just stole all of them.
Seriously
Outstanding. I mean that. I can't even get it across to you sincerely.
Author's response
awe. thank you katy. :) I really liked this one actually so I'm not gonna be all false modest on it. lol