whoever rates this story as a train wreck is a damfool™. this story has from the start been innovative and interesting, if someone wants to read another rehash of cliches, plug in the names of their favorite ship, then sobeit go and read thaqt story, I for one am looking for interesting plots and interesting characterisation, and maybe even something a little different.
like this story.
Author's response
Thank you, as always, for reading and reviewing. And especially thank you for voicing my opinion. Life it too short to waste time on bad fiction. I try to write the good stuff, if I fall short it's not for lack of trying.
For the record, I welcome constructive criticism. If all I want to see is "good job" then I'll just share the story with my closest friends and family. If something needs improvement, let me know, I may not agree with you but I welcome your opinions.