Review for Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

Would You Believe Me If I Said I Didn't Need You?

(#) FrostedGlass 2007-04-20

So… is Pete a New York type of friend? ;)

/ Patrick closed the front door behind her and headed up to his bedroom again. Walking up the stairs and into his room he softly closed his bedroom door. Leaning back against it he stared into the room and was bombared with images.
Molly line dancing across the room. Molly laying down on the floor eating twizzlers. Molly standing in front of him furious for missing their birthday coffee. Molly laying naked in his bed. Molly sleeping next to him. Molly climbing in through his bedroom window. Molly crying. Molly laughing.
"Molly." He whispered outloud into the emptiness of his room. "I miss you. Come home."/ -> And this is the point in time where I ask for your autograph. That paragraph touched me.

Author's response

awe blush
umm....scribblesbridgetlynn there that'll have to do.
yea Pete is definitely a "new york" type of friend. at least in my story. he's done too many dodgey/questionable things that we all know about to be a ny type of friend IRL.