hmmm... interesting. I can't wait to see how the relationship between Naruto and Yugito plays out. Although, I did sort of wonder about those conditional scars. Is that even possible? It seems a little far-fetched. I think a litte more explaining behind the theory of it would be good. Unless, it's one of those 'just is' kind of things, that's okay, too.
But other than that... I like the idea, and Naruto's reactions are priceless. Please update soon!