Review for Flavours
Constructive crit: avoid the use of 'the red-head', 'the blonde' etc. except for very, very rarely. Names and a few words like 'said' are actually unobtrusive when people read; our eye expects them so they flit over them and they don't feel as repetitive as you'd think when you are actually writing them every two sentence.
A very quick frerard one shot. Just a silly twist on Rapunzel, with some fluff.
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