Review for Flavours
Constructive crit: avoid the use of 'the red-head', 'the blonde' etc. except for very, very rarely. Names and a few words like 'said' are actually unobtrusive when people read; our eye expects them so they flit over them and they don't feel as repetitive as you'd think when you are actually writing them every two sentence.
A one-shot based on the song 'Animals' by Nickelback. Gerard and Alex run away, what happens when sh...
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Izzy falls in love with a groupie
In: Guns n' Roses
I promised you that I would always remember. Things like that, well they don't just fade away.
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Hermione's has a period.
In: Harry Potter
Okay, we all have our guilty pleasure and for most MCR fans it's a Frerard Mpreg. Here you go, my sh...