Review for *Make-Up Story!!*

*Make-Up Story!!*

(#) jengrey 2007-04-28

guys, i am going to start from Magic144 cause (nothing personal) but it is confusing...so here i go:
Jay, Odie, Neil, and Herry were walking around in the park, calling Archie, Atlanta, and Theresa's names, but to no avail.
'Where could they be?' Jay wondered aloud, running his fingers through his hair.
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'Come on guys,' Theresa said, leading her two friends. 'I think I see a light down there. Archie? Atlanta?' She spun around to face...a never ending darkness surrounding her. 'Guys?' She called out again. 'Where are you?'
'So nice to see you, Theresa.'
'Where are they--'
'Theresa, my dear, your friends are fine, for now. Do what I say and they will not get hurt. Understand?'
Theresa glared at him but nodded sadly.
'Just so long as they don't get hurt,' Theresa said angrily. 'What do you want me to do?'