Review for A New Twist
(#) iheartyou07 2007-04-29 03:45:53 PM
Wow. You cannot believe how excited I am//was for this chapter. I was up until 4.30 am and had to be up by 6.30 am, so basically I'm running on 2 hours of sleep, and honestly this woke me up and gave me such a jolt.!!
I adored this chapter. I loved it, from start to end. Holly shit. I loved all their little 'touchy touchy' things throughout it. Too cute. Hhaha, and the whole Archie-falling-on-her-boob thing was hilarious, great job! I love his thoughts//sub-conscious. There's so much going on now, with A&T, Jay being jealous, graduation, Cronus, the dreams, the moving. Oh my, the moving. I honestly cannot wait for that. Just another step closer in being a couple:P
I love how he is so comfortable in coming into her room and just sprawling himself on her bed. And damn Jay//Cronus, they just had to go and ruin that moment. As for the whole graduation thing, I'm wondering if it'll be Archie or Jay taking her... hm. I don't tend to like the whole 'grad//prom//dance' scenes in most peoples stories, because its always so overally done and cheesy, but I just know you'll nail it:D Oh god, this is going to be so long, lol, as it always is, I guess.
Anyways. You know I loved it. I can't wait to see what behind's Cronus' little threat, and the dreams in is keeping me waiting and on the edge of my seat. You know what Jen? I hate you. You and your stupid amazing stories. Whore.:P Although I know you love reviews, so you'll probably love this:D
P.P.S. hope you didn't take the whole 'whore' thing personally:P I always have to clear that out with people...
Can't wait for more. And Archie better be okay, or I swear I'll come over to wherever you live and kick your asssss.
P.S. speaking of updates, when are YOU gonna update Screwed Up Love Life? I'm so totally in frickin love with that one. I need more! I NEED IT!!!!....ahem, yessss...
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