Review for I wont let them take you
1. Try grammar. The plot is a good one, but it would help if we(the readers)could understand it a bit better
2. Capitalization "I Won't Let Them Hurt You" not "I wont let them hurt you" It looks neater that way.
otherwise, good story!
'Trapped in this tiny space suffocated with a million wasted wishes......' PLEASE READ?!
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