Review for I wont let them take you
1. Try grammar. The plot is a good one, but it would help if we(the readers)could understand it a bit better
2. Capitalization "I Won't Let Them Hurt You" not "I wont let them hurt you" It looks neater that way.
otherwise, good story!
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