Review for I wont let them take you
I wont let them take you
(#) renthead 2007-05-07 01:31:02 PM
I have a couple things to say:
1. Try grammar. The plot is a good one, but it would help if we(the readers)could understand it a bit better
2. Capitalization "I Won't Let Them Hurt You" not "I wont let them hurt you" It looks neater that way.
otherwise, good story!
1. Try grammar. The plot is a good one, but it would help if we(the readers)could understand it a bit better
2. Capitalization "I Won't Let Them Hurt You" not "I wont let them hurt you" It looks neater that way.
otherwise, good story!
Author's response
Thank you for the criticism (I'm not being sarcastic either!) I'll try to improve on my grammer and stuff! ^^
Filter
You won't see stories with a lower score when you browse or search. Log in to adjust filter.
0
Featured Story
-
Disenchanted
by CosmicZombie (PG)'Trapped in this tiny space suffocated with a million wasted wishes......' PLEASE READ?!
Site Stats
- Authors: 199440
- Stories: 39228
Recent Stories
-
Collision
by gailmarie13 (PG-13)Big changes are happening in Olympus, and a demigod, August, finds herself thrown right into the mix...
In: Fantasy
-
Death Row Isn't Always a Bad Place to Be
by ItsM0llyBitch (G)Gerard has been in prison and painfully awaiting the death sentence for five years but prison life i...
-
Sincerely, us (chapter 4)
by creativewriter19 (R)It's no different than last time. All I want is something different...maybe I'll find it within you....
In: Drama
-
I Will, Tonight
by maggielanee (R)The city of Las Vegas has become a battlefield for the vampires. It's not safe to leave your house a...
-
Psychological Defenses
by BloodyAbattoir (PG-13)Death comes for us all in the end. Sometimes, it's brought on by the actions of our very own mind.