awesome! love this idea! but lets see what ray thinks...
ray: great! i probably wont come up in this much. but its good so far, and its got a cliffhanger.
me: :CHAINSAW PISSED:
ray: :sweatdrop: ok so anyway, its god so far, i really cant give a decent reveiw until the next chapter. so...
both of us: UPDATE SOON!!!
Author's response
Woa... you liked it so much you replied four different times haha. Im really glad you like it. I was really kinda worried. I guess your my only fan. Oh well. Thanks for the review, I'm working on chapter two now.