I loved this even more than I liked the original tale. Your spin on it is amazing, and I especially enjoyed the ending.
Thanks! I'm glad that you liked it. And, as for the ending, that's what bothered me most about the original, so I had to change that part. Glad it worked.
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yet another frerard oneshot. not smutty, but pretty fluffy =] reviews please!!!
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