Review for Brother Z
I really liked your well thought-out ways that Luna's vision might be fixed. Having three possibilities and using at least 2 in the short term was very interesting. I like the idea of a Muggle organ donor working for the long-term solution. It's something most authors wouldn't have considered.
Harry decides to go proactive in his Sixth year, with help from a tutor and his friends.
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