Review for Trafficking Potatoes
Trafficking Potatoes
(#) alanahikarichan 2006-06-18 04:01:38 AM
This is really touching and sweet. ^_^ I love how ou portrayed both Shikamaru and Chouji-- perfectly in-character, and really adorable.
One minot correction-- in the next-to-last paragraph, shouldn't the word be "shougi", not "shouji"? The first is chess, the latter is a paper door, and I've yet to meet a paper door that could teach me about friendship and comraderie. Laugh
Otherwise, simply wonderful!
One minot correction-- in the next-to-last paragraph, shouldn't the word be "shougi", not "shouji"? The first is chess, the latter is a paper door, and I've yet to meet a paper door that could teach me about friendship and comraderie. Laugh
Otherwise, simply wonderful!
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