Review for you can keep my brother

you can keep my brother

(#) jerseygirlxx 2007-05-25 06:05:22 AM

Ah! I cant believe you left off like that! The next better, and I mean better! pick up right where this left off!
The whole baking thing was so funny! I loved how Mikey broke the egg and then wiped it on Gerard! If you do continue to write this sceme remember that they are all sticky/dirty from the mess they made and no ones seems to be watching the oven. Are these gonna be cajun cupcakes? lol. They can feed them to those weiner dogs!!!lol! ----xoxo

Author's response

sorry but i can't write sex scene to save my life!! i can write the four play and the mornig after but sex scenes are my weakness, they come out really (and i mean really )lame..haha feed the wiener dogs and risk mrs, what's her face hissing them to death...

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