Wow, cool chapter! I like how Mikey regrets it and sort of snaps out of something, realizing that it's wrong. I also like how Gerard is kind of speechless about it and not just "Oh my god Mikey, how could you do that? Oh well, a few weeks of therapy will sort it out", cause those sort of things are unmrealistic. It's like, if you found out that your younger sibling was that depressed, you wouldn't act like that. But I like how he didn't say much or tell Mikey off for it.
I'm really enjoying reading this story!!! I can totally picture everything happening!
I'll check out your pics when you get them up, too! :) -Jessie xox