Review for Throwing Away Angels
1. First off, I really love how you write. Well, this is the first time I read anything by you, but your way with words is just amazing. Shame on me for not investing my time sooner.
2. Your attention to the tiniest detail made me smile. Like how he takes off his shoes, for instance.
3. I also liked how that was no dialogue whatsoever. A lot of authors (myself included) tend to pack chapters full of dialogue, which is boring and incredibly easy.
4. I'm so jealous of your writing.
It's a shame there won't be anymore chapters, but I think it's better off being just a one-shot. However, if you decide to continue, I won't object... :)
Part two of "Untitled".
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One married woman, one semi-single guy. What happens when sparks fly where they shouldn't.