Review for Broken Down On Memory Lane

Broken Down On Memory Lane

(#) GwenMerlon 2007-05-31

Ok, my favorite here: "You will stop making me sick now BECAUSE I INVENTED YOU!" She commanded the fetus. Yes, I can just imagine her saying that. I mean, truly.

Ok, so again, superb writing. I loved the 'you know if your in love bit'. It was perfect. (See, now I'm trying to distinguish between this chapter and the last one I read, I'm very sorry if I get them confused) And the fact that in the end he decided that, alas, it was only his penis in love. Plus the Pete/ Ashlee comment and how he sheepishly relies that they were just friends, while we all know very well that they are not... pure genius.

Rock on concert! I bet it would have been a fabulous one to attend. And I can just see the last song in my mind's eye. I'm glad that they're both realizing that they're kinda in love. It's time... I mean, they're both just so incredably stuborn.

Pants!!! Big Pants!!! :) LOVE IT!

Ok, well, you're amazing but you're already well awair of this fact. Seriously I can't wait... so I'm going to go ahead and reread an already read chapter (thus the 'reread'... I'm an idiot sometimes) LOVE YA!