Review for The Mistake

The Mistake

(#) FrostedGlass 2007-06-01

First off: YUCK! Was that greasy dude creepy. Good job on that one.

This made my day:
/"Right." Pete continued. "Because that's the kind of attention I want; the near death kind." He shook his head, causing the hood he had pulled up to hide his identity slip slightly. "No thank you."

Patrick shrugged. "I, personally, think it's better than being about some random scandal, or anything having to do with whom I'm currently dating... or my penis."

Pete blatantly ignored the 'penis' comment. "That's because you're never dating anyone interesting- no offence, Ava."

"None taken."/

Also, since I am an Alex, too, I am psyched. ;)

Another wonderful chapter! You must have a point.