Review for Admirable

Admirable

(#) dansemacabre 2007-06-03 12:06:17 AM

Well done! I particularly liked the part where Elizabeth (at least, I assumed it was her) mentions "the rest of her" and Darcy's pen stops moving. It tied in very nicely with the closing too, framing Darcy's daydream to perfection. Excellent finishing line about how the ink had sunk into the fibers.

Author's response

Thank you. I tried to pack a lot into this little 'fic and it's nice to know people've picked up on it.

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