This story is pretty sick! I really enjoy the plot line, but I'm kind of twisted like that.
I kind of think it's a little drastic - it seems pretty clear that it's not Frankie's fault that Pete was killed, but I suppose if you already have the makings for a psychopath you don't really need much to lose it, do you?
Can't wait for the next update!!
Author's responseDid I go too far? Shall I tone it down? He's definitely supposed to be one sandwich short of a picnic, but perhaps he doesn't need to be be quite so mean?
Let me know - after all, if you don't enjoy, it kinda defeats the purpose :)
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