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Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

by smfiction 13 Reviews

The ancient sleeper has awoken; the truth once so carefully hidden behind the lies is revealed to all...

Category: Harry Potter - Rating: PG-13 - Genres: Drama,Horror - Characters: Harry - Warnings: [?] - Published: 2008/06/19 - Updated: 2008/06/19 - 5179 words

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  • Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

    (#) phillamb 2008-06-19 10:52:26 AM

    Very well written! I've always enjoyed this form of story telling for an introduction. It is a very dramatic form and builds throughout the chapter. I look forward to what you add to the story.
  • Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

    (#) Darksnider05 2008-06-19 10:57:02 AM

    All I really say to that is Woah thats gotta blow... for Harry
  • Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

    (#) loatroll 2008-06-19 12:24:38 PM

    Awesome idea! Truly interesting concept.
    Very good writing and everything.
    Really looking forward to more.
  • Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

    (#) GLW 2008-06-19 01:08:05 PM

    One of the great fics on the internet. It explores one concept that I hadn't seen in a lot of stories, in fact I can count on one hand the stories that have had Harry awakened, revived or the like in the future.
  • Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

    (#) Goddessa39 2008-06-19 04:43:42 PM

    Interesting. I havent seen many like this and the idea of Harry as more of a being than a simple person may not be new but it is something to look into. Poor Harry though, stuck like that. At least he got a good 60 years or so of relitive, while not peace, ability to at least sort of do what he wanted for once.
  • Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

    (#) jabarber69 2008-06-19 06:30:40 PM

    Whoa, that was very tense and well thought out story as well as extremely written. Okay you got my attention, you definitely got my wanting more!
  • Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

    (#) Cateagle 2008-06-19 07:37:33 PM

    Truly a very well-written dystopian story, there. If you continue it, I rather suspect that the "power that be" in this world are not going to like what happens when Harry has returned to full sentience and a full knowledge of what's been been done to him and through him. And you thought the "Collusus" series of novels had a powerful and dangerous non-human sentience...
  • Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

    (#) Jeram 2008-06-19 07:47:42 PM

    Hey... this was good! Not sure what I was expecting, but it was quite a bit of fun to read.
  • Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

    (#) Albeios 2008-06-19 10:40:53 PM

    At first I thought this was a matrixHP crossover. Now I see that Harry Potter is now God.
  • Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha

    (#) dareycow 2008-06-19 10:43:35 PM

    Awesome idea! Do you know how long you are looking at making this story? Also is this a cross-over with anything? Reminds me abit of Final Fantasy, dont know why, don't even follow Final Fantasy :D

    Also a question, the "powers that be" can they only affect people when they are in the beyond or can they also affect the living realm?

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