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Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha
13 ReviewsThe ancient sleeper has awoken; the truth once so carefully hidden behind the lies is revealed to all...
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Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha
(#) phillamb 2008-06-19 10:52:26 AM
Very well written! I've always enjoyed this form of story telling for an introduction. It is a very dramatic form and builds throughout the chapter. I look forward to what you add to the story. -
Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha
(#) Darksnider05 2008-06-19 10:57:02 AM
All I really say to that is Woah thats gotta blow... for Harry -
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(#) loatroll 2008-06-19 12:24:38 PM
Awesome idea! Truly interesting concept.
Very good writing and everything.
Really looking forward to more. -
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(#) GLW 2008-06-19 01:08:05 PM
One of the great fics on the internet. It explores one concept that I hadn't seen in a lot of stories, in fact I can count on one hand the stories that have had Harry awakened, revived or the like in the future. -
Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha
(#) Goddessa39 2008-06-19 04:43:42 PM
Interesting. I havent seen many like this and the idea of Harry as more of a being than a simple person may not be new but it is something to look into. Poor Harry though, stuck like that. At least he got a good 60 years or so of relitive, while not peace, ability to at least sort of do what he wanted for once. -
Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha
(#) jabarber69 2008-06-19 06:30:40 PM
Whoa, that was very tense and well thought out story as well as extremely written. Okay you got my attention, you definitely got my wanting more! -
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(#) Cateagle 2008-06-19 07:37:33 PM
Truly a very well-written dystopian story, there. If you continue it, I rather suspect that the "power that be" in this world are not going to like what happens when Harry has returned to full sentience and a full knowledge of what's been been done to him and through him. And you thought the "Collusus" series of novels had a powerful and dangerous non-human sentience... -
Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha
(#) Jeram 2008-06-19 07:47:42 PM
Hey... this was good! Not sure what I was expecting, but it was quite a bit of fun to read. -
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(#) Albeios 2008-06-19 10:40:53 PM
At first I thought this was a matrixHP crossover. Now I see that Harry Potter is now God. -
Magical Crystalline Web-Matrix: Unit Alpha
(#) dareycow 2008-06-19 10:43:35 PM
Awesome idea! Do you know how long you are looking at making this story? Also is this a cross-over with anything? Reminds me abit of Final Fantasy, dont know why, don't even follow Final Fantasy :D
Also a question, the "powers that be" can they only affect people when they are in the beyond or can they also affect the living realm?