Categories > Original > Poetry
Existence
2 ReviewsErm.. It's kinda a weird poem I thought up one day. Just read it.
Reviews
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Existence
(#) XxMyChemicalPanicsxX 2008-06-24 07:40:21 PM
I loved it!
It wasn't weird!
A little different yeah, but weird NO!!
The quote I read-
"We're stuck here until our souls don't like the body their in anymore".
Just plain brilliant.
For something so short, it definitely has a lot of meaning and it shows off your way with words perfectly.
Though I'm a little sad that this isn't a story with chapters, I completely encourage you to write more poems, if they have affects like this.
Author's response
Well, thanks :D.
People don't usually like my writing so much.
I've written some stories on a fansite I have on myspace, and people have really like some of those stories, but never really got that much liking to my poems, I have a lot of poems written up but never posted, so i think i might type a few up :D
But your review made me really happy though :D -
Existence
(#) Dress_Me_Up_In_Drag 2008-11-05 09:10:52 PM
Whoa..
That makes sooo much sense!
And it made me start to think...you know when you think you've done something before, but in reality you haven't?
Hm..makes me think of that one "R" word...reincarnation...
haha
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